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eos
 Post subject: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: May 31st, 2008, 7:22 pm 
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freelance project in the works... i finally went with this layout...

the clients like it so far.. i hate that the music plays automatically, but it's whatever... i'll try to convince them that noone likes that shit...
i know the 'gaze' section is crap... im gonna combine that with the contact page... and tracks are incomplete... but the whole site is basically a WIP, so nothing is official.. basically i just wanted opinions and suggestions on the layout and shit

thx

http://www.raustria.com/jbm


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revolute
 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: May 31st, 2008, 11:25 pm 
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i really dig the layout, especially the title on the upper left. the only things i can really think of other than what you mentioned already are the splattery things around the myspace/facebook music links and their picture on the contact page; they just don't seem to fit with the cleanliness of the rest of the site.


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eos
 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 1st, 2008, 12:04 pm 
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cool... thanks... i kinda felt the same way, but when i presented it to them they liked it... i'll see if i can change their minds about it..


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 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 2nd, 2008, 5:45 pm 
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looks great.. the only thing I don't like is the the "squaring off" of the text at the bottom. But nice bro!


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eos
 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 3rd, 2008, 8:51 am 
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thanks man.... which text at the bottom?


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 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 3rd, 2008, 8:54 pm 
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sorry eos.. the squaring off of JERSEYBOYSMUSIC...


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eos
 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 4th, 2008, 12:39 am 
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any suggestions? im open to any and all


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 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 4th, 2008, 4:30 pm 
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just play with the text I guess.... maybe a little colour to tie the player with the text as well.

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 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 4th, 2008, 4:31 pm 
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I posted a quick example with a different text.. hit my gallery button bro


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 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 4th, 2008, 9:22 pm 
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dope.. here's what i would do.

1. round off the each of the outside corners. match that player.

2. drop some kind of content, maybe a contact info, newsletter signup or copyright fo'shizzle in the space to the right of the player. perhaps even dropping the content even further down than it is, to meet the bottom of the player. make that shit hug the design so it looks like a part of it, not just an add-on. hell, drop the whole bottom horizon down past the player, and include it in the design. just a suggest.

3. Possibly increase that band name 3/4 to all the way along the top, enlarging as you go. Not a lot of content, so grab with a big name title.

4. That headphone spot is tight, just add a simple 6-10 image image slideshow transition thing that doesn't have any controls, and you're set.

5. Open those bitchass myspace images in PS and desaturate the muthas. Then amp the contrast, burn here, dodge there, post em back up. They'll fit with the b/w theme.

- ok, I've overstayed my welcome. great site so far!

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eos
 Post subject: Re: jerseyboys music website [WIP]
PostPosted: June 4th, 2008, 9:47 pm 
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sweet thanks for the feedbakc fellas.. much appreciated


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