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janman
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PostPosted: August 25th, 2006, 3:29 pm 
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Since you are new this one is a pretty easy volley. 3 shots each. No theme just bring back something from the original enjoy.


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You could have put some more effort into it ;) now it looks like it's rushed.
And what's with the text??

Pretty solid volley, but you can do better Janman.

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Here it is.

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wow. that is pretty tight. Did you use the flasks from mine or what? I think that is really creative how you warped the one glass if that is what you did. I will have to ask you about it tomorrow.
Your design elements are good as well with the action spaced out nicely and presented in a well thought out manner (read rule of thirds). Pretty good color scheme as well. A very good volley, in fact much better than I anticipated, it seems I will double my efforts for the next one.


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Interesting, if thats what he did. Concept is nice but a little too many filters I think were used. I like the ideas behind it though.

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yes alot of filters were useed but without them it didnt all fit together well. color scheme was also more obveous with them. thanks though guys. i really enjoyed it, I look foward to another challenge.
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i do, but not a whole lot. i just got done in the battle against DQS


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volley
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I plan on turning this into a very large oil painting near a replica. I am thinking about a 3x6 composition and try and get it as close to a replica as the orignal as I can. I enjoy the composition and the interesting elements of the forms that were created in this piece. Tell me your thoughts.


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Hope you like it

The transition was hard. not alot to work off of. the flames are your basic background warped.

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I felt you had a hard leave by janman, good job turning it into what you did. I think a different font would have really helped out, I like that you changed the text size and added the drop shadows but the overall font size was a little too big for that font.

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yeah, after i was done i questioned the font and the words. but i guess it works. the volly was really hard to work off of. i am overall pleased with the design though


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